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Also, the ol' spell checker wouldn't go amiss.
That is if you want 'costumers' that you want to 'sale' stuff too.
Maybe 'touching up' some phrases:
"Please do not hesitate to ask if you got further questions"
Sounds like your from the wrong side of the tracks and doesn't sound proffessional at all.
"Aye oop there Guv'nah - gots a bob ta spare?"
"Please help us keep your prices low!"
Sounds like it's in Engrish. Why are we helping you keep OUR prices low? The customer doesn't have 'prices' to keep low - you do!
"How did you found out about us?"
Ummm.....
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